Why did it all fall apart?
The museum of our past
is a shambles of pain
of confusion …
you are sorry
for being who you are
or so you said
toward the end
I didn’t even know you
or did I ever really
as I have said so many
your silence speaks loud
and clear …
Just so well written and again, so filled with emotion. I have a feeling what “Stupid Boy” this was written about. 😉 TF ❤
TY, Gabs. I sure had quite a few “stupid boys” in my past 😉 TF ❤
Gabrielle….or Autumn….this is a powerful effort, very Dickinsonian in its simplicity, and very passionate in an understated way. Great job!….
It was me that wrote the poem 🙂 Thanks for reading it, Ned. I appreciate your kindness and your compliment!
wow, very poignant. Thank you for reading my blog, so that I was able to read this!
Thanks so much for reading Jess 🙂 and I am glad I found your blog as well!
Very beautiful and well written.
Thanks so much for stopping by to read 🙂 I appreciate it so much.
Just wanted to say thanks and leave you another Candle Lighter Award. You are appreciated!
Thank you so much 🙂 It’s so nice to know we are appreciated. The encouragement is just so great 🙂 hugs, Autumn and Gabby
Lovely poem Autumn. Wow you twins look alike! Thanks for visiting my blog, Stay Blessed 😀 Definitely going to visit you two from now on :D:D
Thanks so much for stopping by to read my poem 🙂 It’s fun to look alike, though was way more fun when we were little kids 😉 are you and you twin identical ? I do know what you mean about the questions. Stay blessed and so nice to “chat” 🙂 🙂
This is excellent–I love “museum of our past” (I think I have a whole mall of those in my head). Thanks for visiting at my blog–God bless you richly.
Thank you, and also thanks for stopping by to visit and read 🙂