I hear your voice and words echo through my mind
I am searching for answers that
I may never find
a life filled with sunshine and smiles
lasted for such a very short while
So here I am alone again
trying to rebuild the dream and begin
answers are within my reach
students everywhere, but no one to teach
Echoes haunt my nights, yeah they do –
brightness everywhere, yet no light
twisting roads ahead reach out
showing the way without a doubt
Still echoes haunt my nights
yeah, they do …
ending are never final, I’ve learned
Paths are chosen with many ways to turn
Dancing on the edge of nowhere
can be fun
but reality returns with the sun
tides are shifting slowly now
turning the key and opening a door is how
Echoes seem to fade and a new day is here … …
A very rocking poem twinnie, your writing is just plain magic. 🙂 TF <3=Twins Forever
Sometimes the words seem like they are magic for real 🙂 TF ❤
I don’t know if you are musically inclined or not, but this beautiful poem would make an amazing song.
Also, thank you for reading my blog. I look forward to new posts of yours as well. 🙂
Thanks so much, Dominoe 🙂 I love your name, and I’m not all musically inclined. I wish I were more so. I really am so impressed with your blog, you are so wise for your age! 🙂
Such haunted and lovely lines. It conjures thoughts in my mind of a tortured romantic with dreams bigger than the skies we are trapped beneath. “dancing on the edge of nowhere”…just beautiful!
Thanks so much, I’m glad you like it 🙂
“Echoes haunt my nights”
“Dancing on the edge of nowhere
can be fun
but reality returns with the sun”
So beautiful! These lines specifically drew a response from me. Loved this piece.
Thanks so much, I love hearing that my writing touches someone in some way 🙂